Thread: Tales of Animeb

*Slaps* Baka *Shakes head* You get two more tries at guessing

Originally Posted by Foxy

*Slaps* Baka *Shakes head* You get two more tries at guessing

Actually I nailed it.

Now, your lack of neutrality is showing.

Go back to neutral please.

I'm still in neutral mode. I just prefer to read well written tales, not badly written stories strung out into multiple parts. Now, if you dropped the whole thing where you name the character who is about to say something, for example:

BobCat: Hi

Shinobu: Hi BobCat!

BobCat: How are you?

Shinobu: Fine!"

Thats problem number one. You see BobCat, while thats fine for roleplaying, when writing a STORY, that kind of thing is unacceptable.

Second, your stories are much too short even for 'parts'. They need to be longer and much more detailed as to the goings on of the world, what the locations look like, etc. The great thing about a TALE, as I learned after I wrote my own about Junichi, is that they are both short, lack full details, and lack most speech. Infact, they seem to lack actual conversation entirely -.-;

What you're trying to achieve is best placed in the category of "Short Story" as well as you needing to keep the earlier points in mind.

Please take note of the length of both Balmungs and Chao's tales though. Short, could easily be continued even though the ends are somewhat conclusive, and they're quite fun to read. Yours on the otherhand seem to be anchored in a field that just isn't very interesting. That and being HKSS material which, of course, belongs in the HKSS brigade Theres an entire brigade for anything HKSS related, bar Roleplaying which belongs in the Roleplaying section if it has other things (Such as the Love Hina Episode AnimeB Style), or in the HKSS if said roleplaying is completely HKSS based with little to nothing of anything else.

Viola ^-^

I DID give you two more guesses Now shoo so we can all wait for Chao's and Balmungs next story without having our eyes bleed because of bad writing

-Resident "Lover of Stories and Roleplaying" Tyroki -

Ty that is YOUR opinion on his stories and yes that is story format in SCRIPT!

As for what he says about putting it in the HKSS Subforum we'll let the Admins Decide but until then his tales can stay here and about that bad writing it's YOU opinion but YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ IT! If you don't like it don't read it it's that simple and just talk to an Admin and get their decision until I have heard from an Admin I'm just telling you to Igore it and BC keep writing Big guy but don't argue with Ty........He's Just not worth arguing.Try Nani or Me if you feel like argueing ok?

Once again my Advice has been posted and I advise you to follow it

((Oh and BC get Hina or Chao and let them decide if you can post the tales here ok?))

thats why non official animeb tales = zzz

I just want not to see any arguments in here. This is a tales thread. Otherwise, I'll not autorize any Guest Tales to be written here.

There you go BC please move your story to the HKSS and only write Tales here

Hey, he is free to post his stories here, as long as arguments are avoided. I'm not saying this as an admin but as the person who created this thread.

Also, you need to post the next one already!

HKSS stuff should go in the HKSS forum. Not here. I refuse to see anymore badly written stories in this thread -.-

Originally Posted by Foxy

HKSS stuff should go in the HKSS forum. Not here. I refuse to see anymore badly written stories in this thread -.-

:WHOMP: Ty

The next chapter will be posted soon. Not sure when. But it will be posted.

*end of argument*

XD

Originally Posted by Skully

Ryo and Ty:There are guest tales aloud here as long as they are about Members of AnimeB

I never said they WERENT allowed... Just the 'personal' way he was writing them is not reccomended, as it does nothing but sparks flames. ^_~

Originally Posted by BobCat

No propaganda in there. The propaganda was (and is) used against me.

If you can write a better HKSS Tale of AnimeB, I'd love to see it.

No? Then perhaps you need glasses? There may have been propaganda towards you... But this is the exact same thing that you're doing back. =P

As for writing a better Tale... I probably cant. (Or perhaps I'm just lazy.) Either way, it probably wouldnt be about HKSS... and definitely wouldnt include myself. ^_~

Be patient, you guys will get in there. So stop beefing and telling me my stories are not good merely because you two are not in there.

Quiet you... That's not what was said, and YOU KNOW IT~! =P
I dun care for a guest role... I've already had my fill from Episode 3 and Zero's "Heaven's Plan"... That was enough to stroke my ego for years...

You're biased against me (at least for the past how many months?)

There you go again. No. Seriously, stop that.

Originally Posted by Ty

I'm still in neutral mode. I just prefer to read well written tales, not badly written stories strung out into multiple parts. Now, if you dropped the whole thing where you name the character who is about to say something, for example:

Actually that "Script Style" (as Skully said... We (Gokan and I) called it "ReWrite" style, based after a string of series called "ReWrites") used to be my preffered method of writing.
Yeah, it was lame, but the best I could do...
My skill increased somewhat, though, mostly because of RPing with you... ^__^

...I still cant write for beans, though... So I dont.

Originally Posted by Skully

As for what he says about putting it in the HKSS Subforum we'll let the Admins Decide but until then his tales can stay here and about that bad writing it's YOU opinion but YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ IT!

True... The 'guest stories' are fine here... And I have NO PROBLEMS with BobCat's writing... They're good sometimes.
But only when they're not steeped in blatent innuendo's and propaganda like that last one was.

Please, keep the "Forum Politics" out of the Tales of AnimeB. That's not what they are for.
In the meantime, write us something GOOD, BobCat~! ^__^

Originally Posted by Ryo Misaki

Please, keep the "Forum Politics" out of the Tales of AnimeB. That's not what they are for.
In the meantime, write us something GOOD, BobCat~! ^__^

I thought the tales were about animeB, and were supposed to reflect reality to some degree?

Or should a future one where you come to Motoko's rescue and she says "My hero" to you be stricken?

Yes, I must change that to you rescuing Secchan instead

Now. ~ FOR GREAT JUSTICE ~ let's increase the fun on this place

Originally Posted by BobCat

I thought the tales were about animeB, and were supposed to reflect reality to some degree?

Please note that "reality" really should not mean "propagandist misfiguring of truth."

Thank you for your time.

story. . ."one there was a spammer who tried to commit suicide, then he realized he wanted to kill someone first. . . so unil now, he, is, waiting for a chance to kill azuma-blade. . . ."

Pare, sama ako sayo..

Patayin natin yunga gagong yan si Azuma! >=)

And HKSS tales needs MOAR Pepe..

Pinoy Tambayan is that a way Pepe --------->

XD

Hiwain si Azuma at ipakain sa ascal >:0!

um, joke?