Thread: Tales of Animeb

Bal! I want to beta you to a pulp!

Lol, Samoans don't come in pulp sizes :3

Who can review the stories, please? Bal is busy being my slave.

Ow check your pm's Chao, been away for quite a while and need to be updated about some facts

We just need someone to judge since Bal is busy. You volunteered a couple of months ago. Can you still do it?

Yeah i can, just pass me all the links and i'll read them thoroughly one by one and give my full opinion on them.

I'm honored you want me to judge^^

I'm not completely sure whether this is a good idea, Chaorin! Last time Yon volunteered for anything was the NBB summer contest... and he poofled

Good on yer, Yon Picking up Bal's slack again

Hey, i have things prepared for the NBB contest.
Although due to circumstances (my laziness O_o) it is stalled till next week.
Need to get my laptop back first

*Picks up hinarei by his legs and spins, tossing into a palm tree*

You'll what I'm up too, when it's finished

Chao, we still need to come up with a basis.

Very thank you Yonathen.

Results:

Zac & Tokochi

http://www.animeb.com/forum/creative...r-tokofan.html

The concept of the story is well thought of.
Although the story is too short and not conveyed very well.
Nevertheless i really like this story and based on all that i give this story an 8

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Kataja

http://www.animeb.com/forum/creative...atajainen.html

Honestly this story cracked me up and the creativity is as big as it can get.
Although storywise it's weak and could've been way better with some help.
I'm very honored that i had such a important role in this story, but that won't pursue me to raise my mark. So i'll keep it at an 7

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Chao & Selo

http://www.animeb.com/forum/creative...selo-chao.html

Storywise the strongest and the lenght of the story is just right. Proven by the fact that of all 4 stories this one is being conveyed the best.
Being the most humoristic story, i fear that it lacks a true plot and more ment to be an entertaining limerick.
But even so, it's probably the strongest of the 4 and therefore my rating will be an 8,3

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Aniki

http://www.animeb.com/forum/creative...res-aniki.html

The first entry and what a start it was.
It's funny, brought hiphop into the contest and due to it's "original" use of words, brought the story to a whole new level.
I loved the idea, but it's very noticable that it wasn't taken seriously and therefore the weakest of the 4.
However, i won't give it a failing mark, as i'm sure all of us are fairly entertained by it, it just wasn't good enough.
My rating? an 6,5



Thanks for everyone who participated. For everyone, I'll be giving gifts.

And I still ended up having to look it over before-hand. Anything to make Bal' work, eh?

I feel honored. Thanks, Chao. And the thing about it being too short? Yeah, I started writing it out in a much longer format. It's currently about 10 pages and barely started.

[action=RDKnightZac]bows deeply[/action]

Thank you for the honor and should the opportunity arise again, I will strive to do even better.

Thanks for doing Bal's job, Keisuke!

It was Yonathen who wrote the reviews, all the credits go to him.

Yonathen = Nohido Keisuke

Oh, my pleasure.
Don't know if my opinion is good enough though, but i really enjoyed doing it ^^

OK, so I listened to your calls, and eventually got on with it.

I have a story ready to post. Under the following conditions:

1. Chao-chan comes back to read it and comment, and then stays active for at least a week
2. Ryo writes one too (or at least promises to)