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Update;
After trying to find Tales of Animeb to see if I can get the parts I didn't had I found my old Her Green Under the Red Moon. Ryo was the last who had posted and really fell over the Author = Lazy parts.. After rereading I still know what I meant with it. You see, it's actually what happens in the anime. The scene changes and the actual introductions are skipped. Just as if Keitarou really did got money from Hainati or Shirai because the next scene is when Keitarou crosses the road and one of those old ones from the city counsil sayd :"Beware of the dream."
None the less, I also found them.. Well plain ugly. If I have the time tomorrow I think I'll rewrite those. Should you be interested, I'll tell you when I'm done and you can reread chapter three. They'll also be uploaded to FanFiction.net.
The project is, however, still on hold..
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