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well, the first one is good, but you maybe have repeated the 2but where do i belong" too often. you could do it around 4 times, but then i would use other words to express the same sentence, so, latin would help you, but the english, as i know, has many different words for one word. so, just use them! a dictionary would help. well, it helps me, but maybe you know those words.
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