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25 Jan 2005, 7:07 am
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Evaluation Corner!
Well, that's what I call it. Too scientific, eh? I don't mind. Fits the terms perfectly, anyway.
Okay! This is made to suggest, comment, submit, and get, ideas that can be possibly used in a fanfic, story, art, or just about anything else that can fit in this board(note that I also have that evaluation corner when I write fanfics here). Just make note of what category you are talking about. To start, I happen to find Wolf's comment on my fanfic's "Scientific Corner" very flattering. Well, some may say it's just waste of space. They thought dead wrong. They had that in other Anime, like for I say, Slam Dunk. They have that Dr. T thing going for some great Basketball trivia. Same can go on your story.
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25 Jan 2005, 6:29 pm
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Hmm...well,I´ve always found when the authors write a scene at the beginning and/or end consisting of the authors and the cast.
Example: Motoko: Hey,Wolfie, I don´t want to catch you writing something ecchi containing me and Suu,ya hear? Wolfie: O_o *hides chapter 11*....uhmm....no...of course no..... Motoko:What´s that you got there?Gimme! *grabs the paper out of Wolfie hands* As Motoko read on she turns redder and redder... Motoko: "Without a warning Suu shoves her tongue into Motokos mouth and start to massage Motokos tongue,all the while Suu makes the embrace even tighter. Shocked at first,Motoko flinches,but Suu grabs her firmer, and not long after Motoko relaxes....not long after that she starts to massage back with a vengeance. New emotions fill the girls,somewhere in their bodies a fire begins to burn,and they kiss even more passionately." Motoko turns to Wolfie,her eyes burning a demonic yellow. Wolfie: Uhmm....I´m sure you would react like that! Her eyes are now too bright too look at. Wolfie:...AH!....Suu-chan!Help me! Out of nowhere Suu appears in midair,flying towards Motoko. Suu:You gotcha! Suu flies directly into Motoko and they tumble along the floor,after a few rolls Suu ends up on top. Suu: Well....now lets try that tongue thingie  Motoko: No,Suu, I am no*glompf* Suu had shoved her tongue right into Motoko´s mouth and was now going at it. At first Motoko´s arms and legs were sprawling all over the place with nowhere to go,but after a few seconds she started to relax in Suu´s embrace and eventually she started to kiss back. A few seconds pass by.........a few more seconds pass by........Wolfie stares at the two,rolling around the floor....slight drool on his cheek.....a few minutes pass by...... Wolfie:*ahem*...err,that was it for now......we have to....uhh......brainstorm for new ideas....yeah that´s it.......brainstorming *droolz*.... *curtain closes* There,those are fun
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25 Jan 2005, 9:05 pm
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I should say you as the author had part there.
Is that an "Author's Episode?"
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26 Jan 2005, 7:02 am
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Oh, sorry, Wolf. I think I misunderstood your post earlier.
What you posted was something like the author having a cameo appearance while you're getting in the story. What I meant, is that sometimes the author can sneak inside a certain time where you, as a reader, can encounter some things you would not fully understand. Then you try to explain....
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28 Jan 2005, 8:44 am
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Hmmm.....err.....well......I meant that those things (like the one I wrote) are a cool way to introduce and end each chapter.
Not actually write that into the story itself..... Just as a representation.
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28 Jan 2005, 9:19 am
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It's a nice idea anyways.
It's like you say as the author "And now we see this nice scenery of Suu kissing Mo-chan! Satisfied? Read the next issue for more!" Oops, I think i overdid it... 
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28 Jan 2005, 9:26 am
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Noooo.......what I wrote there would probably be an ending for the chapter I got out now....
It rounds up what happened.....abit of it anywho......A good presentation of the next one would be Motoko going ballistic at me for having her doing something she needs to apoligise for or something of the like.
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28 Jan 2005, 9:33 am
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Well, that's how you ended it on the last chap, right?
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28 Jan 2005, 10:17 am
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So, you finally stickied it!
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28 Jan 2005, 5:44 pm
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Yup, I know. You seemed to have continued it all along.
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28 Jan 2005, 7:29 pm
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Ok.........continued it all along?.....I am sorry,but your English confuse me at times......and I think I know English pretty well.......maybe it´s just me being tired and probably in a naggy mood,but......>_>........XD
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28 Jan 2005, 8:36 pm
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LOL, i think i kinda understand mr Keihas english,.. i think he means that you followed along with the thread, as in.. you supported it.. am i right mr Keiha? XD
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28 Jan 2005, 8:51 pm
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LOL, well if thats the best he could try, you could try your best to understand
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29 Jan 2005, 12:50 am
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Grooby grammer, man....
All right, how do I rephrase it... Ah, I get it... "You did continue to write that fic" Now, is that right?
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29 Jan 2005, 7:45 am
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I'm planning to have an Author's episode. Critique it if you want. I'll try to make it now...
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