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God Keitaro · #21 (**permalink**) 2 May 2008, 12:14 pm

well, no problem. i can tutor it all of ya! thats easy. but for me in latin, the vocabularies, especially for poems, are more important than grammar. so just a thing to learn, not really to understand. but yes, latin somehow sounds more mysterious and cool (everytime better than german!!!). japanese would also be cool, as like as english and farsi (persian language).

Lightdevil · #22 (**permalink**) 2 May 2008, 1:01 pm

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Originally Posted by God Keitaro

well, no problem. i can tutor it all of ya! thats easy. but for me in latin, the vocabularies, especially for poems, are more important than grammar. so just a thing to learn, not really to understand. but yes, latin somehow sounds more mysterious and cool (everytime better than german!!!). japanese would also be cool, as like as english and farsi (persian language).

Like Rex Legis, Rex Populi?

The law of the king is the law of the population

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HAHAHA the devil is tlickling me

*Sephiroth takes the Devil's:devil hug and laughs*

Lightdevil · #23 (**permalink**) 2 May 2008, 6:01 pm

FLower of Despair

As day may fade,
Your face will never shade,
As I look up to you,
It seems endlessly pulling me down,
I can only stand up to watch you,
To bow down as you come pass by.
Will I never be able to raise up to meet you?
Pain is pressuring my heart,
Whenever I see someone close by.
I want to make him disappear,
But it is only me that is drowning down,
In this sea of despair.

Jealousy has taken place in my heart,
Rage has reached up my soul.
But this society is only looking down on me,
Keeping me in cage.
If only I could break free,
Then I did set this whole town on fire,
To make you see
To what extent i did gone
For your only sight.

Then again I don't want to make you cry,
For my sole purpose is to see you smile.
What I can only do is to stay like this,
In the shadows of everyone
And to wish your peace.

Done another one in like 15 mins on the forum chat (sorry ^^' Ederius), I think this one is bad but i said I did post everything in this thread so here it is ^^' have fun

Godess Naru · #24 (**permalink**) 3 May 2008, 6:20 am

well, it is not bad!! it is good! maybe, maybe, maybe not totally as good as your last, but it is also very sensitive and nice! I like your poems very much! They have power!
Nice work!

Lightdevil · #25 (**permalink**) 4 May 2008, 2:18 pm

thank you ^^ yours too ^^

As I'm writing I find the poems more repetitive :x, the third poem is not very good :x... I need to change style but what o.o? help me O.O

Sephiroth · #26 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 8:02 am

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Game over for you!

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As I'm writing I find the poems more repetitive :x, the third poem is not very good :x... I need to change style but what o.o? help me O.O

I would love to but you were mums the points you needed help with...

Sephiroth · #27 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 8:05 am

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Originally Posted by God Keitaro

well, no problem. i can tutor it all of ya! thats easy. but for me in latin, the vocabularies, especially for poems, are more important than grammar. so just a thing to learn, not really to understand. but yes, latin somehow sounds more mysterious and cool (everytime better than german!!!). japanese would also be cool, as like as english and farsi (persian language).

You are a genius or something.... god i wish i knew multi langages. but send me a pm. with latin or something in it so i can start to learn it.....

God Keitaro · #28 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 8:51 am

well, that wouldn`t be that easy, but it might work, if you really want to learn it. You can english well, so this should be a plus for vocabularies! but it is very easy. i will give you simple text at the beginning and then, i will see, how you translate it.

Sephiroth · #29 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 9:02 am

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Originally Posted by God Keitaro

well, that wouldn`t be that easy, but it might work, if you really want to learn it. You can english well, so this should be a plus for vocabularies! but it is very easy. i will give you simple text at the beginning and then, i will see, how you translate it.

wonderful! i am excited!!!!

God Keitaro · #30 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 10:04 am

well, just wrote the first lection for you and others will follow. if you have any questions, feel free to ask. i may answer in a day, or at the same day. if any others want to learn latin, i am happy if you come and ask me!

Sephiroth · #31 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 11:35 am

It's SO HARD

Godess Naru · #32 (**permalink**) 5 May 2008, 12:02 pm

don`t be sad! i also want to learn it in a few years! now i have not got much time, but you also remember it better if you are younger! so, just go on learning it, if you really want it. because, what God Keitaro does, writing latin poems, is harder than translating them, so he told me. I also see it. All these endings!!! waaaaaaaaa! But just go on! i know, if someone really wants to learn smth, you will make it!