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30 Apr 2008, 3:12 pm
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Our love poems ^^
Here iare many poems
post your comments please ^^ From Lightdevil: The Frozen Flame If I can’t live by your side, You will always stay in my mind. I thought I could reach you, But I was only falling away. It still feels so real, The trace of your scent Has put upon my will a seal. I remember the smallest details of our brief contact. But I can only imagine, One day, to hold you in my arms, To bury myself in your hair, To lose myself in the depths of your eyes, To fall for the tenderness of your lips, To rest on the softness of your skin. I can only wish and imagine This impossible feat, Looking up at the falling stars And the rising sun In this fading night Of this day after Tomorrow. If I can’t live by your side, You will always stay in my mind. I thought I could reach you, But I was only falling away. This never-ending grief of mine: Pain, Suffering, Sadness and Loneliness. Despair, Betrayal, Jealousy and Empty promises. All those, that I have felt, Left me, unchanged. My heart is nothing else than stone. My soul is nothing less than frost. I made a Pact with the other side. I had to choose between my heart and my soul, To lose it to Eternity. I chose my heart and I lost my soul. I was nothing more than the Living Dead. But, then I met you. You Words gave me back my soul, Your Sight gave me back my heart, Your Everything brought me back to life. If I had to end my life for you, I wouldn’t hesitate, Though my life is already yours. I wish you to see me, I hope you set my eyes on me, I beg you to notice me. But, I know, To you, I’m nothing more than the Living Dead. If I can’t live by your side, You will always stay in my mind. FLower of Despair As day may fade, Your face will never shade, As I look up to you, It seems endlessly pulling me down, I can only stand up to watch you, To bow down as you come pass by. Will I never be able to raise up to meet you? Pain is pressuring my heart, Whenever I see someone close by. I want to make him disappear, But it is only me that is drowning down, In this sea of despair. Jealousy has taken place in my heart, Rage has reached up my soul. But this society is only looking down on me, Keeping me in cage. If only I could break free, Then I did set this whole town on fire, To make you see To what extent i did gone For your only sight. Then again I don't want to make you cry, For my sole purpose is to see you smile. What I can only do is to stay like this, In the shadows of everyone And to wish your peace. From Sephiroth: Here in my arms You are my world Here in time Our live entwined Forever more My baby My blood on fire As I stare in your loving eyes My soul is yours So i wait in a void 'till you return
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine. 
Last edited by Lightdevil; 2 May 2008 at 7:12 pm.. 
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30 Apr 2008, 3:46 pm
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Nice work! soooo mayn details! nice. this poem really touched my heart so, well, i really love this poem
 !it is totally different from God Keitaros in a way. he tries to take less words and make a short poem with a wise meaning, but this one is a love poem with many emotions and longer. Well done! 
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My sweethaert shall rest in peace.  He was the best thing, which could have ever happened to me! Thank you, Reza Mobasheri, for loving me! I still love you! Why had this to be! Why was fate so cruel to me!
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30 Apr 2008, 5:28 pm
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thank you is there any errors ? or is there anything I should add to poem?
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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30 Apr 2008, 5:32 pm
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That was very touching! Almost brought a tear to my eye XD
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 ~Your eyes like fire they burn me up This time I know I've had enough The page we spent has left me sour And now you're gone my Sunday flower ~
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30 Apr 2008, 5:37 pm
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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30 Apr 2008, 5:42 pm
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haha! but it is really good. i also will write new poem, actually in latin and shorter also like an elegy. but this poem went Godess Naru really close. she also nearly cried. i find it also very emotionful and it is really written in detail. well, mistakes maybe some spelling mistakes or not.
Well done!
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My mission is to protect her against everything, because she is everything I have, Godess Naru!!
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30 Apr 2008, 5:45 pm
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Thank you very much could you help me correct the mistakes :O, sorry if it makes people want to cry ^^'
I actually wrote in 2 hours (during two courses of french, because I couldn't stand listening to the teacher )
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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1 May 2008, 9:01 am
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Very Well done i think that i'll have to post some of my own work on here. Congrats. a job well done.
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Only those who strive to become the best can hope to become my Equal.  http://www.ff-fan.com/chartest Find out who you are.... Go on don't be a coward
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1 May 2008, 9:38 am
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thanks I can't wait to see yours ^^
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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1 May 2008, 9:56 am
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Here's one of my short ones :
Here in my arms You are my world Here in time Our live entwined Forever more My baby My blood on fire As I stare in your loving eyes My soul is yours So i wait in a void 'till you return Maybe i'll start my own trend in here just for my poems........
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Only those who strive to become the best can hope to become my Equal. http://www.ff-fan.com/chartest Find out who you are.... Go on don't be a coward Last edited by Sephiroth; 5 May 2008 at 8:58 am.. Reason: misspelled 'void' ahhhhh.....
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1 May 2008, 1:31 pm
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So i wait in a viod 'till you return
you mean void ? It's really good (o^_^)b let's make a whole book of poems lol, I'm only good in love poems and sad poems GIVE A NAME TO YOUR POEM YOU BAD D: !!
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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1 May 2008, 2:16 pm
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I would but i can't hink of one
and yes that was a typo it was indeed ment to say : void thanks for catching that
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Only those who strive to become the best can hope to become my Equal. http://www.ff-fan.com/chartest Find out who you are.... Go on don't be a coward
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1 May 2008, 2:18 pm
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*Sephiroth glomps Lightdevil*
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Only those who strive to become the best can hope to become my Equal. http://www.ff-fan.com/chartest Find out who you are.... Go on don't be a coward
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1 May 2008, 4:29 pm
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well, God Keitaro just writes poems of several god like sources or elements or so. But, Sephiroth, your poem is great too. I think lenght does not play a role for poems.
Its good!
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My sweethaert shall rest in peace. He was the best thing, which could have ever happened to me! Thank you, Reza Mobasheri, for loving me! I still love you! Why had this to be! Why was fate so cruel to me!
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1 May 2008, 5:50 pm
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*Lightdevil bear-hugs Sephiroth*
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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1 May 2008, 8:58 pm
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damn... light i never knew you would be a poet, nice work!
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2 May 2008, 8:43 am
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well, maybe we could work together! yours Sephiroth is cool too! i would really like to work together with you. but at first, i will write till the end of the week another poem, in latin, maybe with translation! But i am very impressed of your poems!
Well done!
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My mission is to protect her against everything, because she is everything I have, Godess Naru!!
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2 May 2008, 8:55 am
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*Sephiroth bear hugs back and cracks one of Light's ribs* i'm barley trying
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Only those who strive to become the best can hope to become my Equal. http://www.ff-fan.com/chartest Find out who you are.... Go on don't be a coward
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2 May 2008, 9:02 am
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Woah help help!!!!! Just kidding *Lightdevil transforms into Devil and devil-hugs Sephiroth* feel the wrath of the Devil Quote:
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They ask me to choose between the war and the shame. I chose the shame and I got the war. FireFrost Unwithering flowers are so beautiful, Blossoming with determined thoughts, Under the guilty sky filled with torn clouds. I remember and once again, Embrace this never-ending grief, Only destiny of mine.
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