My own Poem Section :D

[Sephiroth]

An angle from above
but where do i belong?
her scent draws me unto her
but where do i belong?
her sweet nector gives me life
but where do i belong?
her image is burned in to my eyes
but where do i belong?
her laughter echos in my ears
but where do i belong?
her voice screams for me
but where do i belong?
her being is mine
but where do i belong?
her life entwined with mine
but where do i belong?
her pain is mine
but where do i belong?
renewed life and hope from above
but where do i belong?
the awnser so clear:
Right by her side for all eterinety
That's where i belong!

[Sephiroth]

Here's one of my short ones :

Here in my arms
You are my world
Here in time
Our live entwined
Forever more
My baby
My blood on fire
As I stare in your loving eyes
My soul is yours
So i wait in a void 'till you return

[Godess Naru]

this one sounds good! in latin i think, it wouldn`t sound better! this is really a poem, which fits to its language!
Good Job! well done!

[Sephiroth]

Originally Posted by Godess Naru

this one sounds good! in latin i think, it wouldn`t sound better! this is really a poem, which fits to its language!
Good Job! well done!

thank you. yea Keitaro it teaching me latin so maybe i'll put one out in latin after i learn it.

[Lightdevil]

nice poems ^^, *Lightdevil gives noogie to Sephiroth* I'm so jealous

[Kazumi Asakura]

awesome!, i love the poem

[Ako]

both are awesome i wish i could come up with poems like that

[Sephiroth]

Originally Posted by Lightdevil

nice poems ^^, *Lightdevil gives noogie to Sephiroth* I'm so jealous

*Sephiroth gives a noggie back to Lightdevil* thank you

Originally Posted by Kagome-chan

awesome!, i love the poem

Thank you

Originally Posted by Ako

both are awesome i wish i could come up with poems like that

Just write about what you care about. it'll come to you

[God Keitaro]

well, latin is a language, which needs much tiem. so you have to take much time, for translations. so, translating english in latin is even more harder, but not and never impossibel. And these poems may sound better in latin then.

[Sephiroth]

Originally Posted by God Keitaro

well, latin is a language, which needs much tiem. so you have to take much time, for translations. so, translating english in latin is even more harder, but not and never impossibel. And these poems may sound better in latin then.

well i keep that in mind.

[Sephiroth]

Oi! you guys should give me reptiutation on one of them. good or bod i care not but it would help me out.

[God Keitaro]

well, the first one is good, but you maybe have repeated the 2but where do i belong" too often. you could do it around 4 times, but then i would use other words to express the same sentence, so, latin would help you, but the english, as i know, has many different words for one word. so, just use them! a dictionary would help. well, it helps me, but maybe you know those words.

[AngelOfDarkness]

Originally Posted by Sephiroth

An angle from above
but where do i belong?
her sent draws me unto her
but where do i belong?
her sweet nector gives me life
but where do i belong?
her image is burned in to my eyes
but where do i belong?
her laughter echos in my ears
but where do i belong?
her voice screams for me
but where do i belong?
her being is mine
but where do i belong?
her life entwined with mine
but where do i belong?
her pain is mine
but where do i belong?
renewed life and hope from above
but where do i belong?
the awnser so clear:
Right by her side for all eterinety
That's where i belong!

aw babe that is so sweet!! i love it. i love you so much forever and always and for all eterinety.

[Sephiroth]

They were for you.