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Old 5 May 2008, 1:10 pm
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A poem.

"Release"

We are for the world, so weary
With catalyst eyes, imagining the life
Dreamers who will never sleep
Because our screams keep us awake
Like thunder on a window pane
Dripping water into our wounds
The ones that living gave to us
Believing in others, we've got nothing left
It's all stuck in a prism, shining bright
A kaleidoscope of colors
Those few we'll never touch
Hungering for the taste of them
To bless our parched tongues
As the water, dripping in our wounds
As the dreamers, who never sleep
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Old 5 May 2008, 1:14 pm
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Wonderful ^_^
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Old 5 May 2008, 1:17 pm
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very awesom that its hard to explain how awesome it is
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Old 5 May 2008, 5:41 pm
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well, it has a mysterious taste. i like that! compex somehow (i mean smth different with that) and a well structure and good choosen words!
Well done!
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Another one

"Dream again"

A dream, a dream
with gray eyes and auburn hair
Forgiving and soft
Fair, with a delicate voice
Reminds me of butterflies, of spring
So far away and smiling.
Illuminating my days by calling out for me.
and I dream, I dream
Of a day when I can hold you
and touch your lips like rose petals
Listen to you tell me of your day over tea.
Be something new, knowing you're there.
A mere step away, not a thousand miles out of reach.
We'll take a walk by the ocean moonlight.
Spending memories with you
No longer having to dream.


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wonderful as i read i may have weeped or maybe not but it was very good
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Old 6 May 2008, 1:02 pm
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wonderfullll!!! it is so, how can i say,... soft! i like it! it is really emotionful!
Well done, my dear!
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Yes well done!!!
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De suprema ars artificis
the noblest art
A artifices quam:
Ovidius, Homer, Hafez als auch Xerxes.
Incomparable with artists like Michel Angelo or Leonardo da Vinci,
Sunt illi quattuor diligens ita,
Gleichsam wie Geschöpfe welche von unphilanthropischer Kenntnis
Who were donated by godlike might.
Pro modo humanus ars,
Wardn von jenen glîcherwîse omnipotenet Opi publiziert.
This fact led to human hatered, odium quod in,
Philanthropischer Ebene beruut,
As we know!
Propter ea illi mox expulsi sunt,
Wî der dennoch mithumanen Erschöpfung halber.
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