Finally, the book!

[CBHans1]

It keeps getting better! I like to read this, because I get pictures in my head at once! Its fun!
You have talent!

[God Keitaro]

thanks! hahaha! now, all the characters get together, in the chapters you have just read, as you can see. hope you like the 8th chapter too!

Chapter 8:

Rey: ah!!
Batista: are you alright?
Rey: just my right arm.... . Nothing else.
Garruk: come with me!
Batista: who or what are you? You look like you are from the jungle.
Garruk: no! That you can trust me, i take down my warmask from my face.
Rey: a human!
Batista: where shall we go?
Garruk: you survived! You must be choosen! We have to meet us all.
Batista: only we 2 wrestlers survived?! Ok!!
Rey: good, ........ Or not. Lets go!

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While everyone mentioned went to a meeting now, more creatures came, creatures of darkness. And because it was the doomsday, prophets, those who were send by god, came: Jesus and Mohammed.

Dante: nero, are you alright? Where is your sword?
Nero: yes. The sword is beside me, when i just wanted to split a demon....
Dante: look, and arab!
Mohammed: i am a prophet of god! You must be humans, creatures from another world, who came to the planet earth. My name is Mohammed and it is doomsday now, thats why i am here!
Nero: ah! A holy person of this world!
Dante: be careful!!! A magician!
Mahat: no!! I am the servant of the pharao! I am here, to lead you to him! And dunno loose your weapons!
Nero: yes!!!
Dante: nothing seems to work normal anymore in this world?
Mahat: yes.
Mohammed: then, lets go!

They all followed Mahat, the dark magician.

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Trunkensoul: where am i? what has happend?
Jesus: i am a prophet of this world, and you are chosen, to protect this world.
Trunkensoul: i leave you..... . Or, shall i listen? Ok!
Jesus: follow me! We have to concentrate our power against the evil!
Trunkensoul: ok! Then, lets go!

They walked through the sahara for a while, and finally came to the meeting.

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[CBHans1]

Nice, its getting more exiting, a lot of characters to remember tho' ^^

[david]

I dont know if you would be able to use the peoples names in the story. I also find that its just made up of moastly speach, the story should move on much faster.

[God Keitaro]

hahaha! thanks for the critics! no problem! thats just the most primitive form of my novel: the dialogue form! in the end, the book will have around 1000 languages and available in: english, german, latin, maybe japanese and farsi!
thanks you for your critics and here is chapter 9! hope you like it too!!


Chapter 9:

Mahat (dark magician) and Mana (dark magician girl) meet somewhere.
Mahat: yes, yes. Everything changed in this world.
Mana: yes! But i hope, we must not again defeate a creature like Zorc or so.
Mahat: i dunno think so. we have not to protect our world anymore. We have to protect the whole universe now!
Mana: i also think so....
Naru: wait!! Can i come with you?! Please!!!!!
Mahat: you dunno come from here... . But you are filled with light! Ok!
Mana: just give me your hand!
All 3 flew to the meeting.

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After around 1 day everyone met in zentral africa, which did not exist anymore, where Jhoira and Teferi created a small continent out of magic. And more came than thought at first, also humans!

Teferi: hello, everyone! We are the chosen, those who have survived. We need a plan, because the evil is mightier than ever before. The final battel!
Yami: exactly! We have to bunch our ressources, to survive and garanty a good future for our offsprings!
50 cent: yo, bitches! Be quiet!!! Be productive! I dunno want to die!
Urza: good, thanks 50! We should now decide a leader for each race. I am the leader for the magic the gathering creatures.
Yami: i am the leader for the duel monsters creatures.
Niggus: i am the leader for all creatures from Tamriel and Oblivion.
Trunkensoul: i am the leader for all warcraft creatures!
50 cent: good! I am the leader for all humans!
Ra, Ur-Dragon, Akatosh, Onyxia: we are the gods of those tribes! Just the humans have no god at the moment. We will also help them!
Felipe: ok! Quick now! We need a plan!
Olivia: how should we discover our “ magical powers”?
Yugi: good question! Your power are mostly connected with your hobbies or jobs or so.
Blade: i am a vampire and so, have my power, because of my film.
Urza: ok! Each tribe shall collect magic from now on. In an area of the earth, it should be saved...the best place would be the core!

Because of a high rate of disparity, everyone accepted what Urza said. Then, the tribes spread on the whole planet, to collect magic!

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[CBHans1]

keeps getting better ^^

[God Keitaro]

thanks! and now, chapter 10! hahaha! hope you like it too! and again, i want hard critics, please!!!!


Chapter 10:
Suddenly the continents started splitting, and new continents existed! But then, all continents came together again and the rifts disappeared.

Legna: thats pathetic! How shall we store that much energy in the core of the earth?
Teferi: yes, you are right!
Ra: then store everything, in the galaxy! This would be enough space, i guess!
Mana: yes! Thanks!

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Meantime mana followed the humans, to explain them how to use their magical powers.

Mana: you can also call me Mana, and not dark magician girl, if you want.

Felipe: good, Mana, how can we comunicate now, in our minds?
Mana: just think at the person you wanna talk with and then, imagine you talk with it!
Will: and the teleport?
Mana: thats easy too! Just, for the beginning, timagine the place you wanna go, and you will be there!

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Apoll: do you hear me, Ares?
Ares: yes, damn!
Re: i am the son god of egypt, older than you are!
Isis: so, you know us too?
Aphrodite: yes! We have to unite our powers!
Seth: the god of gods is gone and a too mighty evil power rules now, even mightier as you, Zeus!
Ra: there you are!
Isis: who are you three?
Obelisk: we are the 3 egyptian gods from a parallel world.
Sleifer: yes! We have to unite all our magical powers!
Aphrodite: why do we need these creatures which are no gods?
Obelisk: they are the only creatures who can collect powers which are greater than ours in the end!
Re: good! Ok, then we also unite our powers and help them, as we did it 5000 years ago,
for the humans!

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[CBHans1]

Alright, you wanted critics
Maybe you should cut down on all the characters, I think you have too many of 'em and too little descriptions of the environment (how stuff looks around where they are) and main characters (their looks and stuff like that)

[God Keitaro]

well, yes! good! thanks for the critics! well, maybe at the beginning of chapter 12 you will see who are the main characters! but just feel free to ask, if you wanna know smth about the background story of one of the characters! and here, chapter 11! also want hard critics again! please! thanks!


Chapter 11:

Time by time all creatures found out their special powers and how to use them. The cooperation between humans and creatures born with magic, became better!

Jhoira: and, have you already collected much magic?
50 cent: well, yes. And you, Garruk?
Garruk: yes, yes! It is exhausting, but we will be finished soon, i think!

It was not just a time of friendships, there was even more between the different tribes.

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Kaiba: ah, Niggus, could you just go on finishing this, i will be back soon.
Kisara: wait, seto!
She followed him behind a destroyed building.
Seto: good, you followed me! I wanted to tell you smth... I LOVE YOU!!!!
Kisara (red in her face): wau!!! I love you too! Good, you said it!
After some time, more and more relations between the creatures evolved.
Eg: Niggus and Ishizu, Anzu and Atem.

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But not all relations should last...
Keitaro punches Naru.

Naru ( crying): why did you do that? What did i do wrong?!
Keitaro: i just don`t like you anymore, damn bitch! By the destuction of the world, i have enough money now and porns! And you still hit me, an we are married! Thats enough...
Naru: bitch?!! I was loyal everytime! (crying and angry) the punches are just reflexes from the past, sorry! Ah....i leave you and work together with the others if you treat me like this. I hope you are lucky now!!
Keitaro: get lost, you thankless brat! I will have fun too, without you!!!

She run away with tears in her eyes...

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Atem: we already have collected much energy, thats good!
Urza: yes, yes, but we still need more!
Anzu: but the others are not as quick as we are, or?
Atem: right, my darling! Just a few are as quick as we are at collecting magic.
Mahat: i have he feeling, that something very bad is going to happen soon! It will be inexorably.
Obelisk: yes, the evil gods powers rise!

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[Kazumi Asakura]

aww..poor naru, i liked it, very cool...im not good giving critics, what will happen with naru and keitaro

[God Keitaro]

well thanks! just wait a bit and go on reading it! you lie it for shure!
here is chapter 12! please again critics and comments! thanks!


Chapter 12:

After a few days Urza, Niggus, Atem, Trunkensoul and 50 cent noticed a neutral, and growing power, coming closer to them, on the earth.

Trunkensoul: be careful Garruk!
Garruk: what shall i care about?
Sleifer: there!
Obelisk: this creatured moves extremely fast!

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He met Urza, Atem and Niggus, when they met them.

Atem: who are you?
Niggus: what do you want?!
------: be happy! I brought some greater fprces with me!
Urza: show us your face!
------: here, please! I was no human from the beginning on..... My soul was just given into such a mantle, because i had to hide, because of on opponent for a short time.
Atem: and, from where do you come from exactly?
------: well, my life cycle is a bit like yours, Atem. Well, i just had to find my powers, i had once. By this catastrophy on the earth, explosions were caused. I lost my whole body because of one of this explosions, and should have been reborn. But still, a small part of my brain was left, and a great enough force of will, to live on. Thats why i regenerated me, with necromagic. But the form of my corpus now, is not the one, i had as a human, it is my true form, my original body! And to answer your question, i am from a parallel world, where, as far as i know, i was a god.... Each day a part of my memories come back to me, and this world becomes more and more similar to mine, or, the other way round, maybe.
RG (richard garfield): what did you take with you?
------: suddenly, a river split and i found a new valley, like the lotus valley.
KT (kazuki takahashi): we will help you to get back your powers, but just, if you help us!
------: promised!

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[CBHans1]

Originally Posted by kitsune-san

aww..poor naru, i liked it, very cool...im not good giving critics, what will happen with naru and keitaro

Aye. Its getting more interesting now.

[God Keitaro]

Thanks! And here, i continue with Naru a bit more! Hope you like it!


Chapter 13:

Batista: who is the new one?
Borat: i have nothing from an idea..?
Rey: he does not look very sporty
Ares: yes, but his power is pretty high, i have heard.
Ishizu: look! Here he comes!
------: i know you. You are mighty too, ishizu.
Ishizu: thanks!
Batista: from where have you got your power?
------: from you. I just took 1/1000 of your collected magical sources, just as a small piece to let my power constantly grow without doing anything.

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He nearly got everything after some days, which he spend on this “new” planet.
Atem: and, how about you?
------: good, thanks! I have noticed that there are some couples? I can marry you, as i have the might of a priest. Just, if you want!
Anzu: that would be wonderful, if you could do that?
Atem: good, you are allowed to!
------: thanks, tat you trust me that much.

He married all love couples on one day. Just Naru not, who was very depressed by the broken marriage between her and Keitaro.

4 days later.

------: hey, Naru Narusegawa! i have heard from you. I am really sorry, what happened to you....
Naru: but it happened already. (she holds a knife on her throat)
------: no!!!! Don`t do that! I once had a goddess by my side. I understand you. Her name was T....., sorry, i can not mention her name, i can`t, it is like blocked.
Naru (suddenly listened to him): i am sorry for that too. But, what happened, and why blocked?
------: she left me, because i did not care enough for her. Then, she lost her immortality and was killed by an assassin (his eyes look empty). Blocked, because with the loss of her and my knowledge about myself i also lost severla emotions.
Naru: i am really sorry for that. You seem to suffer more than me. Which emotions did you loose?
------: saddness, love, wrath, feeling of being sleepy, feeling of being bored, pain and tensional feelings. And some more, the smaller ones. Just hope and happyness are left. Good, but not enough. I am no human and have to accapt this.
Naru: i wish, i could help you, but i already have suicidal thoughts, as you see.

He takes her at her left hand and helps her to climb a small hill.

Naru: i know the world looks terrible now.
------: you, ...... What is different with you? You feel different than the others. You are a bit like, ....., ah, not important.
Naru: aha,....? Lets do a breake and go on talking a bit more and eat something.
-----: yea, why not? Ok!

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[CBHans1]

poor ------ and Naru....
interesting. ^________^

[God Keitaro]

yes,....but you mentioned the right 2 persons! you will see what is going to happen next in chapter 14! hope you like it! thanks for comments and critics!


Chapter 14

Urza: good, he is not here! So, Atem, what do you think of him?
Atem: i feel nothing, to be honest.
Urza: how do you mean “nothing”?
Zeus: we also don`t feel anything. Either he hides his power perfect or he has no power or we cannot feel his power because it is too high for us!
Teferi: quick! Look, here comes Naru!
Naru: hello!
Apoll: what were you talking about?
Naru: nothing important, just the things, he already told you.
Atem: be careful, Naru! We don`t want that something happens to you, or that he hurts you, like Keitaro did. I mean, he married us but....
Naru: good, i will be careful! Thanks! Bye!!
Urza: she is too lightheaded, i hope nothing happens to her.

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------: come on! Work harder!
Nero: it is better we go now.
Dante: go, go! You will get her, man!
Naru: hi!
Nero and Dante: chiau, chiau! Good luck!
Naru: i have a question: what is your name?
------: i would like to know it myself. Just look at me, if you want to talk to me. But i think, i will remember soon.
Naru: oki! Thats good! But time is short. And thanks. I am not depressive anymore nor i think anymore at suicide.
-----: no problem. I have to thank you! You have helped me to gain back knowledge and powers. I feel again sympathy, and being bored and tensions. Thanks!!!
Naru: wonderful! What do you now again else?
------: well, i got those things to know again in dreams. I am the lord of all elements and over darkness and light. And i remember some poeple here.
Mana: how are you all?
------: good!
Naru: good, thanks! What do you need?
------: she is my wife at the moment.....
Naru: what???!!!!
Mana: well, yes, but we separate us. I love mahat and ----- just married me, because i should have forgiven him something....

After around 2 days, mana married Mahat.

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------: i really see it now. Mana is much happier now.
Naru: thats right.
------: just married her, because she was so lonely.
Naru: and, did you gain more feelings now?
------: yes! Because of some insolent foolish behaviour here: wrath, fatigue and the feeling of retribution.
Naru: why are you soo sad?
------: Niggus nearly died yesterday, because of an assassin by this evil god.
Naru: thats saddness! Good! Don`t mean it in a bad way good.
------: right! Just left: pain and love. I mean physical pain, i already know the psychic pain. Have to risk it and get attacked by this evil god.
Naru: thats dangerous! Be careful! I will wait here for you.
------: i will be careful, don`t worry, Naru!
Naru (with a doubt in her face): well, ok then....

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[CBHans1]

Wow, its getting exciting ^__^

[God Keitaro]

thanks! and now, chapter 15! if you wanna know more about the sex scene between Naru and Ganxter, please, pm me! thanks!


Chapter 15:

He attacked the unknowing evil god, who wanted to put a destruction spell on the earth.

----- got all damage by the attack of the devil god.
Naru (shocked, sad and angry): oh god!!! Help! You must not die! Please, can someone help him! Heeeelpp!!
-----: now....know (spits something out) ....pain (takes a breath and cranks). It`s .......alright. My....regeneration....is starting already. I now know my name again........by this shock.....my nickname: Ganxter.
Naru (crying): stay there! And don`t move!
Ganxter: don`t bring any help..... . Just.... Just stay here and.....keep caring for me!
Naru (crying and careful): ok. Here, a bit water.

She bent down, crying, and sits beside him very caring. She cares him, till he falls asleep after 2 hours.
Shortyl after he fell asleep, she did also.
After 10 hours, he stood up and put down the dressings from his arms, legs and chest
and put on his armour again. Then, suddenly Naru too woke up.

Ganxter: shhht! Stay there! You are tired. Thanks for everything.
Naru: no, no, ist ok! Do you feel better?
Ganxter: yes, thanks! Not just because of my magic, also because of your treaty, thanks!
Naru: good! Well, Ganxter, then. But just your nickname. Somehow, curious!
Ra: everything alright? Sorry, that we did not believe you from the very beginning on. But, where do you have all this power?
Zeus: no god wold have survived this attack!
Ganxter: aha! Well, i also was a god once, a god of a whole universe.
Urza (astonished): thats weired somehow. But, well, everyone thanks you for preventing this attack! Thanks!
Ra: it is better we leave you allone now. And also thank you, Naru, for caring for Ganxter. Bye!

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Atem: a mighty creature, this ganxter.
Re: good, that he supports us!
Ishizu: he must have noticed that we are the good ones.
Ares: if not, he would have made a pact with this evil god, maybe.
Jesus: lets help him!
Mohammed: lets collect power for all!
50 cent: yes, lets Naru and Ganxter work on their own. I think, that they can work together very well!

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Naru: alright then. Have you got all feelings now?
Ganxter: yes, except love.
Naru (turns red in her face): i would be ready...... To show you love.
Ganxter: really! Thanks!

Naru kissed him for around 1 minute. Than she takes him at his right hand and they go for a date in an old restaurant.

Naru (totally red in her face): and, how was that?
Ganxter: nearly got it! But something is still missing. It has to be something else too!

Then, Naru tore him into a silent room. She threw him to the ground, gave him a fetish foot job and a fond blowjob. Finally they ended after 2 hours.

Ganxter: wow! Now i got it! I love now, you!
Naru (exhausted and red in her face): good, but me?well, i have to admit, you were very good, and i have already loved you, since a longer time....
Ganxter: do you want to marry me, Naru Narusegawa?
Naru: yes, i want!!!!!

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[CBHans1]

Whew, that came suddenly!
well its nice though...

[God Keitaro]

well, this couple does not have a rest now....a bit tragic, but this is not the worst point, already. hope you enjoy chapter 16 too!


Chapter 16:

After that, a wedding was planned, lead by Atem (he was the priest).

50 cent: party! All the best, bitches!
Niggus: cool! Cool, man!
CJ: good luck!
Ra: you shall be blessed with devine might!!
Mana and Mahat: all the best!
Atem: all the best, and good luck!
Felipe: finally, a reason for celebrating!

All gods and creatures congratulated both of them. Also tears of joy were dropped.

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Ganxter: my dear, you are also a goddess now!
Naru: thats not exactly the reason, why i have married you. We will die in love together. Ah, i am so happy!
Ganxter: na, na, na! We will never die, because we are gods. And i love you that muc, that i have soo much energy, that i could destroy a whole galaxy!! I don`t want to loose you, you and the love, you are all i have for me! You are invaluable!!!
Naru: nice, thanks! I also love you more than anything else! But lets maybe slowly go on. Can you remember your name again?
Ganxter: i know now, that my nickname was longer: Ganxter alias Borat. But there is still missing a part of my nickname, which way my true name. Friends called me like this!
Naru (red in her face, and loughs): hihihihi! Borat! But thats an advance.

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