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9 Jun 2004, 9:40 pm
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My First Drawing
This is the first thing I have ever drawn in my entire life. It took me all day. I really dont know how it turned out so well its the first thing ive EVER DRAWN!!!!!! I am so thrilled over this I am going to draw Sakura next.
http://img51.photobucket.com/albums/...yo_drawing.jpg
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10 Jun 2004, 7:15 am
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*Hic*....
Great job, SF.. Not that bad at all for a first attempt, man. I don't like the lined paper, but if it helps position things, then its good. Not a great idea to just grab whatever comes to hand though, but I don't know what sort of thoughts sleet through an artist's mind, so maybe I shouldn't comment on that. Some of it's a little messed, but you got most of the proportions right, so try and build on that. I will say, make sure you get the eyes of your character just right, because if you don' the whole drawing looks a little wrong. You did a good job here.
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10 Jun 2004, 12:46 pm
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Holy crap!
Thats... actually better than me! XD (Though... thats not saying much...  )Though... just a couple things. You have a GREAT work for details... Just work on your face style. Its too blocky and squarish. Make it more like a tapered U shape. Also, be careful of the proportions, and the lining of things. Such as... In your pic, her eye on the right is slightly lower than the left... But with the way that the face is tilted, it should be a touch higher. Also, the ear on the right is a bit low. But, other than that... Its REALLY REALLY good! O_O I cant shade like that... And I have a hard time with details like that too. Great work, and keep it up! ^_^ And... as Hinarei said... Lined paper BAAAD! XD I dunno... maybe Im just picky though. Ive never used lined paper for any of my work. I always use white printer paper... Maybe its become an obsessive habit. =Þ
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11 Jun 2004, 5:40 am
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dude...
looks good.. but can be better!  try get some tutorials online to help you
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13 Jun 2004, 3:00 pm
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Madcow said it...
If you are not so good that you can't be anymore better, you can always become better!  I'd say it's kinda good for a first drawing... my first drawings weren't looking that good... Practise makes you good, from good you can get better and finally if you are practising a lot... best! But one of my friends told me that: "Don't try to be the best; try to be as good as you can." There you should have some people's support! Way to go!
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14 Jun 2004, 1:30 pm
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ohh good..
just a little more improvement and you'll be good in no time.. can't wait to see your sakura..
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