Okay, since i just now figured out that i could do it here(I went over this part like water over ground lol)

Anyway, here is where you can give your reviews for my fic.

here's the Link: http://www.animeb.com/fanfiction/144...-darkness.html

I accept criticism, flame, anything, but i would like them to be constructive for the sake of the Fic please.XD