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    UPDATE!

    Well, nothing to fancy but since this is my first update in quite a while..

    I finished the first part of the morning on chapter 2. I finally made a start. I really had a hard time, the idea's I had where either forgotten before I got to my fanfic (damm games) or where discarded by me after a few seconds to minutes. It is almost the usuall strange awakening Keitarou gets but not quite.

    As I said it wasn't much but it'll most likely be enough to make him late for breakfast, after this and making the final adjustments in my home work I'll probally continue on it.

    Root for me.

    P.S. who actually did read my fanfic? (Birthday Chapter one and my lesser creation but up till chapter four) See sig for the place to look.

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    As usuall I had my inspiration where I thought not to get it.

    Today I had one lecture from half past twelve till two o clock. After that I was to be picked up by my parents to go to the dentist. After all that we went back home. So We where in the car on the highway heading for home when I remembered I needed to make a phone call. Not seeing the number in my phonebook I started up my laptop because I had all my numbers in there and made the call, then I found out that I had a wireless network connection (we where infront of a trafic light) trying to acces it properly and getting some internet connection I started up OpenOffice and suddenly opened Birthday.odt. After that I just started typing..
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    So with a lot of lack of sleep and an early day today, I went to bed last nigh and started up my laptop. Once again, the calmness and darkness of my room when I'm supposed to be sleeping gave me some inspiration. I'm now past the breakfast scene. Look foreward, I'm gaining more and more ground on my fanfic.

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    Update;
    After trying to find Tales of Animeb to see if I can get the parts I didn't had I found my old Her Green Under the Red Moon. Ryo was the last who had posted and really fell over the Author = Lazy parts.. After rereading I still know what I meant with it. You see, it's actually what happens in the anime. The scene changes and the actual introductions are skipped. Just as if Keitarou really did got money from Hainati or Shirai because the next scene is when Keitarou crosses the road and one of those old ones from the city counsil sayd :"Beware of the dream."

    None the less, I also found them.. Well plain ugly. If I have the time tomorrow I think I'll rewrite those. Should you be interested, I'll tell you when I'm done and you can reread chapter three. They'll also be uploaded to FanFiction.net.

    The project is, however, still on hold..

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    I've just updated chapter three in animeb, I will be updating the FanFiction.net version too.

    I've typed out the parts where I just told everyone I was lazy, added some other minor text and applied the format I currently use to it. I will be looking at chapter 1, 2 and 4 aswell to see if edits are needed, should there be updates I will tell you so here.

    Her Green Under the Red Moon is still an on hold project, these edits have been made out of the love for my audience, please look foreward for any updates on the Birthday Project. I'm working on it, it's just not progressing very quickly.

    [IMPORTANT!!]

    It seems that my update for chapter 3 overlaps parts of chapter 4, I will look into it. Sorry for the inconvenience.

    [IMPORTANT#2!!]

    Though it's not a major problem I *will* be revicing chapter 4, since it's from a different person's perspective it's just a bit odd that what's said in chapter 3 and 4 don't match.

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    Chapter 3 and 4 have been revised on both animeb and fanfiction.net
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    Now that that was out of the way, I finally found a little time to work on my fanfic Birthday again.. And let me tell you, it was great... Well, to be precise, the rereading of my fanfic was. I just wanted to read the last part to get 'back in the story' unfortunatly I needed a bit more to find my train of thought which I left there at the end. And thus I spend the greater part of my 'writing time', reading. I just stopped writing the last time in such a way that it was a totall cliff hanger.. Hell *I* was wondering what would happen next and I wrote the fanfic :XD. Suffice to say that I'm really pumped, I actually got to write a small additional part and if all goes well I'll be able to write through my next lecture at school

    I wish me luck, I hope you do too, and perhaps I will be able to pull of another chapter by the end of today.

    Look foreward.

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    Well Mr.Anderson just don't rush things. Can't wait to read it.


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    Hmm, small bit's and pieces fall together.. It all fit's perfectly but it's going slow.. Also I find it hard to get the 2/3rd of the four eyed threesome back into the story.. But I have several idea's, now only to work them out.

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    When you say 4-eyed threesome I'm guessing you mean Haitani, Shirai, and Keitaro right? Cause if you're not then I'm confused, heh. Oh well, slow and steady my friend, slow and steady, just make sure that it'll be gold when you show us!


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    "Slow and steady may not always win the race, but atleast it doesn't end up splattered against the wall"

    And yes, Haitani and Shirai are the ones I meant.. I just lost the names at that time so I just said the four eyed three some. It was the translation given to me in both the manga and the anime. So I figured it would be ok for me to go with that too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Anderson View Post
    "Slow and steady may not always win the race, but atleast it doesn't end up splattered against the wall"

    And yes, Haitani and Shirai are the ones I meant.. I just lost the names at that time so I just said the four eyed three some. It was the translation given to me in both the manga and the anime. So I figured it would be ok for me to go with that too.
    Okay, that actually made me laugh, haha, I never heard of that one before. And I kind of assumed you were talking about those 3 guys.

    But how's the progress coming along so far? All the pieces of your story still fitting well together and almost done your next chapter yet?


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    Well I have the afternoon of day two all plotted out, I still need to find where or when to get those two third back in the story and I'm not done with the evening yet.. But otherwise I even found time to type a bit in the train so I'm getting more and more inspiration as we speak.

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    0.o *blinks*
    hmm..
    *blows away dust*
    good as new..


    Anyway, it's been a while all. I've pretty much typed out the greater part of the midday now and I've worked out most of the details, still a bit of grey here and there, but that will be fine.

    The thing is, with my work I can't do much anymore. After school it's almost directly on to work and after that, bed. Though since I got to work directly after school I still have about three hours of traveling time to type, but it's vacation so I don't carry my laptop with me..

    That's kind of it, I wanted to let you know I still think/work/plan Birthay and to explain a bit if my inactivity and tell you why I don't type at the moment. (I just got a lot to do...)

    I'm probally going to change jobs anyway, I really love working where I do, the atmosphere is great, the people too. But it's just a lot of traveling for someone who still goes to school and the public transit connection kind of sucks... 1,5 hours become 2 to 2,5 hours traveling. Trainst that don't go in the middle of the week and the fact that I'm not home till the next day (00:15) almost every day makes me lean towards a job closer to home (and also less hours with no set times.. It's either 09:00 to 13:00 or 18:00. Or it is 13:00 to 18:00 or 21:00. Or it's 18:00 to 21:00. So even with less hours, thanks to school and this set time table, it'll still suck)

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    Whoa, that's a mouthful, really got a tough life you have going there. Makes me think my problems are complete BS, hah.

    So... changing jobs huh? What are you looking for by the way?


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    Something that pays XD..

    Right now that other job would be help desk for 'Tele 2'. A phone compagny that also provides internet and such (though it lies a bit different). It's less hours, pays more and closer to home.. Like a little more then half an hour away.

    After much thought I have decided to quit my current job and switch to that one as soon as I can. I'll be sending a message that I'll be using wednesday to speak with Tele 2 (since I could only work a small ammount of time that day anyway) and if I get hired quit the other..

    All in all, it can't continue like this. I am on the internet late at night, bored to death with no inspiration left.. I cannot find the will to write anything down lately....

    I don't feel comfortable anymore..

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    In case anyone wondered about my previous post, not that anyone is here, I didn't get that job but I now have another help desk. My agency offered me it and it's pretty good.. Pays descend, I have some degree of control when I work or not (I just have to meet a minimum of hours and points and provide it about a week in advance so the planning department can deal with it). But I'll have to quit in a while, going to Amsterdam, about 2 to 2,5 hours away and I'm going to school there so that's not going to work.

    Now on topic.

    For a long time I had lost a big part of the second chapter of Birthday untill I recently found it back (about a day or two ago). However I am currently stuck. The train of thought which is responsible for the majority of the story already derailed, rusted and sold as old iron.

    Current situation is that all of the residents are around the table having dinner and tomorrow is our favorite tanned resident's birthday. Keitarou has worked quite hard to provide a good day and mostly has one last obstacle. He has to ask her out. Thing is, all the food is already devoured and Keitarou had already asked if he could ask something after dinner, which is now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Anderson View Post
    not that anyone is here
    And yet somebody might be lurking about when you are not expecting it.

    When you return, please delete your double post. Tricks of the board, you know.
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    I merged the posts already ^^' now go ontopic and give meh advice

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    To do it Akamatsu style, next something completely unexpected happens, forcing the two to go somewhere together to solve a problem of some kind... Which would create the perfect circumstances for Keitaro, if a) he were not so shy, b) he were not so clumsy, c) Kaolla were not so hyperactive, and d) Sarah had not stuck with them.
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    For some reason which will never be explained, Sara is not in the fanfic. Clumsiness of Keitarou will hardly be mentioned in this fanfic though I have some references and moments in it. The fact that he is shy is why I am having difficulty, it does have to feel like Love Hina and Suu-sama's hyper activeness is not really a problem. She can concentrate long enough and Keitarou can really do something right if he really has set his mind to it

 

 
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