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  1. #81
    Aniki is my King
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    Okkkkkkkkay, typing story...now! It'll be up really soon .

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    okay... i missed something...

    Did NO one submit?!


    SHAME on you ALL! submit something!




    Please?


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    Sorry bout the long wait folks, been having some trouble coming up with idea's, but here's a little filler to tide you over until I can get the sequel to Weekend Retreat up, Enjoy!


    Endless Spiral
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    He felt himself slipping again, he hated the feeling, like falling through a long, dark tunnel with nothing but the promise of hell awaiting him at the end. Alex hugged closer to his pillow and shut his eye’s tight; things had been like this since he was Four and the last Fourteen years since had been nothing but restless nights and daily visit to the local psychiatrist for more useless medication. Alex began to notice that his pillow had lost it’s regular warmth and had taken on a damp, rubbery texture; opening his eye’s slightly, Alex recoiled with a look of sheer terror as he noticed his pillow had been replaced by the mangled corpse of some unlucky soul, its face forever frozen in a look of pure terror and agony.

    Alex spun around wildly, unable to leave the confines of his bed due to the fact that he was now adrift in a crimson sea of blood. Pulling his knee’s to his chest, Alex recited his personal mantra, desperately trying to will away the morose illusion that was plaguing his waking mind, but the scene did not fade; his desperate plea’s were cut short as he felt his bed come to an abrupt stop, he looked up to notice that he had landed on the beach of an island, its beach leading to a great expanse of jungle; its dark and foreboding aura almost beckoned to him, willing him to come and meet his doom.

    Against his better judgment, Alex stepped off of his bed and slowly made his way into the dark forest under the pretext that staying put would get him no where. He was beginning to become disoriented as the darkness set in, making the world meld together into indiscernible shapes and shadows, the noises around him were beginning to grow louder and Alex was getting more and more paranoid by the minute. He finally caught sight of a distant light and stumbled towards it, eventually stumbling into a campsite with a fire blazing in its center with several figures sitting around it.

    As Alex approached, one of the figures stood up and turned, revealing the face of a middle aged man with glasses, smiling as if his grandson has just arrived for Christmas dinner, “Ah, Alex, Welcome” he said in a warm voice, “We’ve been expecting you.” Alex looked at the man with incredulously, “Why would you be expecting me?” he asked as the man began to laugh heartily, “Well, we were beginning to grow hungry my boy! Its been ages since a meal’s wandered by!”

    Alex almost died of a heart attack, they were waiting for him, they were going to kill him and eat him, his thoughts were punctuated by the figures rising to join the man, and together they started to move methodically towards Alex. In a frenzy of thoughts and emotions, Alex reached into his back pocket and drew his buck knife, snapping its blade out and taking a defensive stance, “You guy’s better back off, I’m not afraid to kill you!” he shouted almost hysterically.

    The man began to laugh again as he reached Alex and put his hand on his shoulder, “Don’t worry my boy, it won’t hurt mu…” his words were cut short as blood poured out of his mouth, Alex’s knife was embedded in his heart and was quickly draining him of his life source, “You…you…little…” he managed to stammer as he fell to the ground, dead as a doornail. Alex looked at the man with a barely concealed malice, “I told him…I told you…” he said shakily as he stepped forward, “None of you listened…” with those words, the boy rushed forward and unearthly screams filled the night air.

    “Good work Alex” a voice emanating from the darkness, “By killing
    them, you’ve killed that which has held you back.” Slowly, the bizarre nightmare world began to dissolve and Alex found himself back in his room, but unlike his previous nightmares, he was still covered in blood, “You have made peace with yourself and realized what you are” Alex gave a brief nod before standing up, “Now go my boy, its time to punish those who kept you from your calling…”
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    𝘊𝘰𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘦𝘳𝘦 Aoshi Shinomori's Avatar
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    Nice as always man!
    Cant wait to read more.
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    Wait, is this real?

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    Oh yeah, Zac, shouldn't we be doing a colaboration story or something...? I just remembered...
    Good job, by the way, with your latest story, though it is more than a bit creepy.

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    Nice of you to join us again Ms. Tokofan, I'll be in touch with the details soon enough. To everyone else, Thanks for the positive reviews, and no Fuzzy, this is not real, just a product of my overly twisted imagination.

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    These stories are really good!

    You've described the scene and set the atmosphere very well. The tension mounts as the story progresses, leading to the eerie cliffhanger ending.

    I shall look forward to the next instalment ~

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    Um, could I be a villian:croc: or maybe a victim some time please? I would like that very muchly.

    Great stories by the way

    "Murder is child's play. Grab a knife and stab someone. It's that easy...Now getting away with it...That is a different "story" altogether."

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    oooh philosophical much?

    I'll be doing a story soon people and plan to chase up on tokofan for that story she was supposed to be doing with zac.
    If zac doesn't feel able to I'll write it with her


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    Alright, I've been out of it for a while, but I'm back and ready to throw some more stories into this place, But... I would like to make a story based on what the fans want. So throw in your ideas and give me some good material to work with!

    Also, since the last contest I held ended in a horrible wreck, I've decided to reinstate it, So send me your Horror Stories via PM by April 13th and the winner gets their story posted in the Corner and gets a chance to work with me and Lock on another story of importance! So, sign up here and good luck to everyone... again!
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