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    Soon in Uruguay... Sorocabano's Avatar
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    Your fic was very good, Amma! Congratulations for your story!

    Do you want to write another story with our kendo-girl, Motoko Aoyama? I want to wirte a fic when she moves to Brazil (a Italian-and-German-immigration-city near Porto Alegre, in Southern Brazil) with Tsuruko and your husband. On this fic, she would suffer a violent culture shock between Brazilian, Japanese, Italian, German and gaścha (culture of Argentina, Uruguay and Southern Brazil ) cultures.



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    Yes I must say I enjoyed your fanfic quite a lot. The only thing I would add, but I am reluctant to do so since it's my own short coming as well, is that the world itself could be described a little bit more. I think Hina also pointed it out earlier.

    Other then that, kudos.

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    umm might not have the right to ask but is there any chances for update???
    registred just for this atm.
    time to check out the site ^^
    Last edited by 0208; 13 Jun 2010 at 6:08 am.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 0208 View Post
    umm might not have the right to ask but is there any chances for update???
    registred just for this atm.
    time to check out the site ^^
    At the end of a certain post it said this;
    Quote Originally Posted by Ammaranth View Post
    The End
    So the story is over.

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    A very nice story.

    It stayed true to the characters, while producing something new and interesting. It kept most of the key elements of the series intact, while making sure not to neglect any characters.

    Good work!

 

 
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