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    My fanfic: Negima: Rise of Darkness

    Someone said that I should just post the story i have so i went to my fanfiction profile and got my story that is currently in progress. So here you guys go, happy Reading! ^_^

    Note: This is my first Negima fic. XD Enjoy.

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    Finally, It's the Graduation ceremony for Class 3-A. After their adventures in the Magical World Negi and the rest of the Ala Alba studied for the next year for Graduation, and all of Mahora looked forward to it.
    That night though, would be known as the greatest single handed defeat the Ala Alba, as well as Mahora, has ever had, their defeat at the hands of a Mysterious group. Everyone in Mahora, even Negi himself, has been captured. In his last efforts, Negi was able to let Konoka Konoe, and her lifelong friend Setsuna Sarkurazaki escape.
    With Enemies of frightening power after them, Setsuna and Konoka run for their lives to get help from their new friends in the Magical World, but will they make it in time to save Mahora?.
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    Three weeks after the Attack:

    "Setsuna! We're here!" exclaimed Konoka happily.

    Setsuna was in a daze, they've been running for three weeks, three weeks since Mahora was taken over, even her Teacher Negi wasn't able to hold back the threat. It's hard to believe it's been three weeks since everything happened.. She looked into the sky, I hope everyone's alright. "Hey Setsuna!" Setsuna was dragged from her daze to see Konoka's face right in front of her, which caused her to yelp and jump back, causing Konoka to laugh, "Hehehe... Setsuna you were spacing out again." Setsuna regained her composure before bowing, "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have.." she said, her head bowed in shame..

    Konoka put her hand on Setsuna's shoulder, "It's Okay Setsuna, you don't have to apologize." she said smiling.

    Setsuna shook her head and she smiled, "Lets move, They could be anywhere." Konoka's smile faded only for a second as they made their way to to a village in western China, approx. hundred and fifty miles from the sea of japan. How they got that far? lots of running and rides from locals.

    As they entered Setsuna looked around very carefully, I don't see any sign of those Things, maybe we got away? she shook her head at the last thought.

    The things that attacked Mahora have been chasing the two girls for the last three weeks, she doubted that they would give up so easily. As they walked through Setsuna saw a wanderer eating at a small open shack, he had a sword next to him so she guessed that he was a swordsman, she couldn't see his face cause it was under a hood, and being twenty feet away didnt help much either, but what she didn't expect was the Man looking towards her. She quickly turned her head away and kept on, after a bit she looked back and she saw that the man was back to eating, I wonder who that was..

    "Setsuna! I got the supplies!" She looked towards Konoka and thought, Even though the world is falling down, She still stays positive despite the terror she has come across.. With fresh supplies, they made their long trek into the rocky mountains.. It'll be quite a while before we get the Gate port in Wales. They didn't seem to notice the multiple shadows creeping behind them.
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    Several hours later:

    It had gotten dark, they would rest in their small camp for the night, then continue on at dawn, by doing this they estimate that they would get to the Gate Port in a few months.

    Funny thing is, three weeks before, the Ala Alba planned to go the Magical World for couple months after graduation, right now they could be having fun there, but these mysterious monsters came and took over Mahora, in the last three weeks, no one has heard from them.

    Setsuna kept watch, she hadn't gotten much sleep the last few weeks, Konoka usually healed her so she could continue. The fact that Konoka's Provisional Contract from Negi was still working, meant that he was still alive, which meant that the others were also.

    Her thoughts were interrupted when she heard something move, she looked up in time to move out of the way from an attack from above. Looking around, she saw four figures in the shadows, they seemed to glow, not to mention that they looked human, but were more mutated.

    Konoka wake up moments after the attack and screamed, Setsuna saw one attack Konoka and she moved to get her away. Holding Konoka bridal style Setsuna jumped through the trees,

    "Setsuna, what about our stuff?" she asked. "Don't worry, we'll shake them off and go back for the stuff later okay?" Konoka nodded.

    Just as Setsuna landed on the ground a hand grabbed her ankle, causing her to trip and release Konoka, who rolled few feet away. Konoka was picked up by creepy looking hands, they almost looked like lizard scales. Setsuna was about to move but she was pushed down when a clawed foot rested on her back, holding her down, another one emerging from the ground.

    A voice that sounded like hissing was heard, "You gave usssss a good workout...you certainly stayed ahead of usss the lassst few weeksss, but now, we need to take you back so we can use you asss sslaves.."

    Setsuna knew this was the end, she didn't have either of her Artifacts, nor was she strong enough to fight four of the beasts that even Negi had a hard time with. But now that I think of it, it almost seemed like they- her thoughts were cut short when a new voice appeared,

    "You guys are something else, attacking Women? How low can you get."

    She was able to turn her head towards the voice as the hissing voice replied, "They belong to usss, we can do whatever we pleasse.." there was a pause before the man replied,

    "What a bunch a baloney..Oh well, sorry for the trouble, I'll leave you to your business."

    She heard foot steps walked away and got mad, not even knowing that she stood up knocking the thing above down even surprising the lizard men,

    "Hey! whats the big idea, you bastard?" The man, who was hooded and cloaked stopped and turned his head, "You seem like you can handle yourself."

    Sestuna recognized the garb, she also saw the sword, It's that guy! she thought as he then turned around, the Hissing man grabbed Setsuna by the hair pulling her to the ground, "Don't get any ideasss Human." it looked at the man, "Sso, you gonna leave or what?"

    The man's answer was him drawing his sword, "Why would I? I've been following you all day, you guy's sure are stupid, or you can only sense these two girls...Well i kinda figured that you were after them, but then again I know exactly what you are to."

    The Snake-like man shouted, "What do you know? We'll jussst kill you now, attack!"

    Ignoring the Girls, the four lizard people charged and leaped at the man, who was pulling something from his pocket and a sudden flash enveloped the area. When the light vanished the lizard-like people disintegrated.

    Setsuna has never seen such an attack before, Konoka was also shocked that someone was able to save them. Both Girls stared at the man as he stared at them, he took his hood off revealing black hair blue eyes and a handsome face aside from the scar, and a little bit of non seriousness was there, he kinda reminded them of Kotarou, but only more adult like, and without the god ears. The Man then said, "So, you must be those two I saw in that village."
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    And that's the end, of chapter 1 ^_^ so, How was it?

    I will Beat you into a Bloody pulp now,
    And ask Questions later.

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    Chapter two XD
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    Both Setsuna, Konoka and the Man who rescued them made it back to the camp, The man insisted that they move onward, "Since their scouts are destroyed, there's no reason to think they wont be able to find out where we are, they might've reported it before they attacked you."

    Earlier they had explained to him what happened over the last few weeks, and their plans to go to the Magical World he was sorry to hear about that and decided to accompany them there.

    "That would make sense, considering that they were able to find us even though we had a good several days ahead of them." said Setsuna, "Alright, lets go then."


    As they packed up Konoka remembered how they escaped..but she never did learn why Negi only helped them...
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    Flashback:

    Konoka was being pulled by Setsuna as they ran through the burning alleyways. Only five hours ago did strange and powerful monsters emerged from a Portal that opened right near the World Tree. Mahora was being attacked.

    All Setsuna saw was four figures that stayed by the portal, and fearing for Konoka's safety She went to go hide where those things wouldn't find them.


    Course that was wishful thinking that they would give up easily.

    Someone in a white hooded coat had just suddenly appeared in front of them. He spoke calmly, "Leaving already? We wont hurt you, you two are to special to be allowed to live." His words were very contradictory, which made the two girls more cautious.

    His hand glowed and what looked like a beam of light shot from his hand, Setsuna and Kokona were bracing for the hit, but it didnt come.


    They opened their eyes which they closed in fear, they saw Negi in his lightning form. "Girls, you have to get out of here." The man spoke again, "oh my, I forgot about you." he said it with no emotion at all, he didnt even seem worried...more like annoyed.



    Negi just smiled, "try and stop me." before they knew it, Setsuna and Konoka were enveloped in a strange light, then Negi's voice, "You two must reach the other world, someone will be waiting for you there." That was the last time either of them heard his voice.

    And the last they saw was that Negi was about to fight the the man before they blacked out.

    End Flashback
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    After they were ready, the man finally decided to introduce himself, "By the way, my name is Sojiro." Konoka responded first holding out her hand, "I'm Konoka Konoe, She's Setsuna Sakurazaki. Nice to meet you Sojiro-san!" she said enthusiastically.

    Setsuna said nothing, if fact ever since they met Sojiro she had a strange feeling, Whats going on with me? She thought.


    Sojiro then said, "If these guys are anything like you say, then we better get moving, I'll set up some distractions so we could buy time." He didn't tell them everything though, like the fact that he has no memory whatsoever, I'll tell them later. They went on their way.

    HHHHHHHH
    Meanwhile back at Mahora Academy, several people stood across from each other underneath the massive tree which towered over all the buildings., all wearing cloaks to conceal their identities. "We can safely say that the plan is going along as expected." One said, "But we might have a small problem."

    A much taller man then said, "The one known as Negi Springfield was able to help at least two members of Ala Alba escape, we have no idea were he sent them either."


    "What of the scouts sent after these two?" asked one wearing a green hooded cloak.

    The Taller man said, "They tracked these wo to somewhere in China, but we lost contact several hours ago, we then decided to-" he was interrupted mid sentence.

    "Your saying that four Lizard Mutants, each one with nine thousand power just vanished into thin air? I thought you said that these Little girl's powers didnt exceed more than five thousand, would you like to explain this to me?" the man yelled.


    The taller man shook his head, "I cannot explain this, the only thing I can come up with is that someone of greater power killed them." A man wearing a blue hooded cloak spoke, "Then it is possible that it could be Him." the other three were silent, a shorter man spoke up,

    "No, it couldn't be, We took care of that meddling brat, he is no threat."


    "Well thats all fine and dandy, but I think I know what this is about." they turned to the new voice and the person continued, "it possible that bastard Nagi, the Thousand Master, was involved."


    The taller man disagreed, "That couldn't be possible, he wouldn't show himself just because some little girls couldn't stop us."


    "What of the rest of his Companions?"


    "Some of them just so happened to be at at this wretched location, but that bastard Albireo Imma is nowhere to be found, he isn't even were he was said to have stayed..he's currently gone missing. No trace."


    the one who hasn't spoken the entire time, he wore a white hooded coat, he had the hood on so no one could see his face. he said, "It doesn't matter if we didnt get anyone, even if the Magical World gets involed, it will all be according to Plan anyway."


    "What is the Plan anyway Sir?" asked the taller man.


    "Thats a secret." but in his mind he thought, I personally made sure that man's memories were wiped, but before I could kill him he got away with the help of the Thousand Master.. He still could prove to be a great threat..



    The man in green then said, "We have other matters to attend to, how is the status on the Rebellion here?"

    The Taller man said, "It's hard to track their movements, we don't even know where their base of operations are, which for us is kinda bad." They continued on their meeting, seemingly not noticing the small flying camera watching them.


    HHHHHHHHHH
    Three days later:
    "So your pretty sure that your friends are still alive?" asked Sojiro


    Setsuna and Konoka nodded. "Our Artifacts still work." Setsuna explained, "So there isn't reason to think they're dead."

    After that little encounter three days ago, Sojiro decided to tag along with them to the Magical World for certain reasons, when they asked what he was going to do he just either changed the Subject or said, that is was a secret.

    "By the way, I've been meaning to ask, what power was that when you killed those things?" asked Setsuna. Konoka also wondered this, "Yeah, what was that?"


    Sojiro nodded and pulled out a small card, "This is a Flare Bomb, massive blast of energy that kills monsters, got these from a friend."

    The girls wondered who this Friend was. Setsuna was thinking that whoever his friend was He or She was very resourceful. "So, who was it?" asked Konoka. Neither Setsuna or Sojiro expected her to ask.

    Sighing he said, "I can't tell you, It's a secret." That part of the Conversation ended there.


    "So it kills any kind of monster?" asked Setsuna. Sojiro nodded, "Yes, course it won't work on high level demons but hey, good monster repellent"

    Konoka giggled and Setsuna was just thinking "Anyway, I think we shall keep going." pulling out the map he had he tried to make sense of where they were. "Closest village is there." He pointed at a spot on the map, "about thirty miles west."

    They stood up and started on their way.

    Setsuna pulled Konoka closer to her and whispered, "There's something weird about him, why wont he just tell us?" Konoka just shrugged.

    "Hey ladies, if we move now and don't stop, we can make good time and get to the village by midnight tomorrow."


    "What about the Lizard people?" asked Setsuna.

    "Not to worry, I had already did something that'll make them lose our trail."

    They looked at him blankly and he just smiled, they did remember that he said that he'd set up some distractions, they didn't ask what they were though.


    Meanwhile:
    "What the hell is Thissss!" Several of the Lizard goons held up fake versions of Setsuna, Konoka and Sojiro, which started to fade like dust, "Thisss iss jusst like lasst time! But thosse blew up, or turned into fire...now dusst."


    "Thats what happens when you underestimate your enemy. You should learn from this or I'll give you the same fate as those pieces of trash that failed."

    The person's voice sounded icy and cold, but it held a certain authority that even the Lizard beings - Who didn't fear anything - didn't dare argue with him. All the twelve foot scaly Lizard leader said was

    "Yesss Ssir."

    "Good that we understand eachother." replied the man. He stared off in the distance talking to himself, "Darkness is rising, what will you do to stop it, little Girls?"


    One more chapter before the Adventure starts.
    next time we see who this Rebellion at Mahora is, though I think you already know the answer.

    I will Beat you into a Bloody pulp now,
    And ask Questions later.

 

 

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